I don't understand why it's so hard to move forward from this?

No real plot or anything, just make sure you put those baaam baaam sounds in the trailer.

Prometheus: Returning Fire

Cast:

Noomi Rapace: Elizabeth Shaw
Michael Fassbender: David
Clancy Brown: General Spears (from the comics)
Akio Yutani: Hiroyuki-Shimosawa
Jennifer Carpenter: Captain (Pilot)
Harold Perrineau: Lead Scientist
Ray Stevenson: Battalion Commander
Ben Foster: Merc Squad Leader
Jason Flemying: Hunter, Squad Leader

Synopsis:

As the space ship prometheus travels to the distant planet coordinates little did they know that Mother Titan. A Yutani constructed, all purpose, state of the art, deep space battle ship was following their beacon, as planned by the dying Bishop Weyland and his daughter. On Mother Titan, an entire community of scientists, Trackers, Hunters and Mercenaries await confirmation of their Classified location, even though each Sector been fully breifed in their missions, especially the Scientists.

In the previous events of Prometheus, the only people aware of David's ability to sync information with another model of the same design, were Vickers, Weyand and David. With Elizabeth Shaw, in a state in cryo sleep, David (with a reattached head) is transmitting their course to himself, Bishop Weyland and Akio Yutani, back on 'Mother Titan'.

An assembly line of Bishop Weyland clones lie in a dormant state aboard the huge vessel, and even though he had learned to perfect the cloning process,he is still obssessed with finding the key to eternal life.

The alien craft arrives at the Engineers planet, and the entire surface is covered in oceans of the 'black ooze'. The black ooze is the organic product of the planets natural eco system that the Engineers are still experimenting on. The Engineers fear the baron lands and black oceans so carry out experiments on the various creatures in fortified labs, experimenting with the black ooze in a controlled environment outside the home of their giant Citadel. Their city sized lab is based on one side of the planet, whilst the Citadel resides on the other.

Eventually Mother Titan catches up to the alien ship, as the crafty droid David has guided them to his position. David docks with the freighter and they arrive shortly after at the ginat black planet. The Engineers are none to pleased at their arrival, and so board the Mother Titan in armed force, a shoot out ensues and the majority of the ships habitants are kidnapped and brought back to their Testing Base for Human Trials. As the Engineers leave with their cargo, they fire upon the ship.

The remaining residents including 'a David', Bishop Weyland and mainly mercenaries and soldiers) scramble to their escape ships and pods and jettison from Mother Titan to rendezvous close to the Engineers Research base to mount a search and rescue Unfortunately humans create the most potent form of the alien beast and the first generation aliens escape, in the panic the prisoners escape.

While Elizabeth Shaw is being tortured and interogated by an Elder Engineer, the surviving prisoners plus an uninfected test subject Engineer mount a rescue. Using the state of the art all terrain water and land, battle vehicles contained within the drop ships they escaped in, they make haste for the safety of the Engineers Capital. the Citadel, in hope of finding a ship that will get them of the planet.

In a mad dash against time to outrun the mad mixture of alien hybrids (planet born, Engineer and human) the teams split in two as Elizabeth Shaw rebels against Weyland and Yutani to capture a live creature, or an infected member of the team.

Shaw reveals the purpose of the human race, informing everyone that we are nothing more than glorified janitors taking care of 'their' planet. But we have become so sophisticated in the art of warfare they dare not attack us by conventional means, and that the black ooze fused with human DNA creates the most deadly Xenomorph specimen, and are to difficult to control. As the Engineers become ever more desperate to abondon their planet due to the continuing alien threat, the odds are against Shaw to ensure that neither Weyland or the Engineers allow the alien organism to leave the planet.

And as the aliens overrun the city in hundreds of thousands of escaped test subjects, Shaw, a handful of survivors and the pilot Engineer take of as the Engineers City is overrun. Unfortunately one of the survivors was infected at the hands of Weyand, as the Facehugger attacks the pilot in his cockpit chair, they crash land on the planet Acheron, LV-426.

There is a opening for a third one there somewhere, I hope all that made sense, sorry about the bad grammar 🙂

Since your the one living a dream and obviously the one to go to regarding submissions of screenplay's, story boards, or just synopse's in general. How would somebody go about submitting to Scott Free Productions if I was to flesh out my Prometheus 2 story a bit more.

Anyway, hope you make your $100 Million. Hopefully next year I'll be making my own when I release my novel on Amazon, look out for it next Christmas…Legend of the Red Sun Village.

Here's a hint: If you want to do a simple monster movie in space, just do it. Don't shoot yourself in the foot by adding all this 'deep' stuff about god if you're not smart enough to deliver the goods. Ridley, you're not Tarkovsky or Kubrick.

Viola! Done! Now, where's my millions and three-pic deal?

Timothy J. Holloway
author/filmmaker of "PERIL"